
By: J.T. Krul (writer), Georges Jeanty (penciller), Rob Hunter (inker), Jason Wright (colorist)
The Story: These exploding Calculator robots are really harshing these Turkish clubbers’ buzz.
The Review: In crossovers, besides the stickiness of mixing up different characters (who may or may not be a good fit for each other), you’ve also got the issue of how the different styles of the writers will work together. It’s usually best for them to co-write the story; you get a more cohesive product that way. You also avoid the position of comparing one writer to another, which may be uncomfortable for the one who comes off weaker.
In this second half of a crossover with Red Robin, Krul shows with painful obviousness that his writing has a ways to go, quality-wise. He’s simply not as deft or nuanced a writer as Fabien Nicieza, who wrote the first half of this story in Red Robin #20.
Their different approaches to dialogue say it all. Nicieza’s takes for granted that these characters have history and know each other. When Tim says, “We should—oh, sorry, Cass—you go,” he doesn’t have to explain what he’s sorry for; you get that from the context and what you know of them. Krul feels the need to make everything explicit, resulting in chunky, in-your-face dialogue like: “Because you didn’t know [he was an android]. And killing him would have felt very real. I couldn’t let you do that.”
The major weakness to Krul’s dialogue has always been that it doesn’t let the characters show distinctive personalities. Most of the lines feel like babble: “If the circumstances were different, this looks like it’d be a fun place.” Not only is this remark just silly (if there weren’t exploding robots around, everyplace would be more fun), but it’s lifeless as well—anybody could have said it. It feels like filler, padding the time until something more meaningful happens.
Continue reading
Filed under: DC Comics, Reviews | Tagged: Calculator, Cassandra Sandsmark, Cassie Sandsmark, Connor Kent, Damien Wayne, DC Comics, Fabien Nicieza, Georges Jeanty, J.T. Krul, Jason Wright, Kon-El, Red Robin, Rob Hunter, Robin, Superboy, Teen Titans, Teen Titans #92, Teen Titans #92 review, Tim Drake, Timothy Drake, Wonder Girl | 4 Comments »


